picking up a new hobby

Actually this hobby of mine has been around for quite some time, its just that i have long forsaken it. Recently, after receiving motivation from some inspirational sources, i decided to give it a shot again. Writing songs.

Currently i have one completed song and one in progress. I will put up the one in progress, and hopefully if anyone has any constructive comments, feel free to advice me on how to make it a better one.

*this is for the chorus, and i also have tried singing it to my tune. will post up the tune that i had in mind next time when i have finalized it

同情让人更加伤心
离开也许是一种解脱

我终究 提不起勇气
只得默默的承受这个悲剧

若你心里已有别人
恳求不要再回头牵挂

我的心 早已不属于我自己
不想要的是你的同情。。。